(1) 使用交談式語言,盡量避免業(yè)務術語。
? ? 不用:
? ? Re your letter of the 21st inst. , in connection with our account, we are remitting our check herewith, as per your request, in the amount of $100.00.
? ? 而用:
? ? As requested in your letter of the 21th June, we are enclosing our check for $100.00.
? ? (2) 在保持交談式語句簡明特點的同時,又要避免俚語或結構欠佳的語句。
? ? 不用:
? ? Hello,This is Charles Fonda. I'm writing about the contract. Mr. Wu asked us to explain the new clause.
? ? 而用:
? ? We received a letter from Mr.W[收起]