(11)需求大則必然會造成漲價,這一點希望引起你方注意,同時請你們早日作答.從前的譯文: Active demand will certainly result in increased price, to which we hope you will pay attention. Meanwhile , we expect your early reply.在語法與語義的完整性上都無懈可擊,但在語氣上居高臨下,含有教訓(xùn)人的口氣,讀者自然不悅.如果著眼于促成生意的目的,可以略去不說"注意".a. As you are aware that big / active / great demand in the market will lead to price hikes, we look forward to your early orders.b,Probably you he noticed that strong market demand for steel tubes , and an early order will benefit both of us.(從對方的角[收起]