新手入行 請各位大神幫忙修改 發(fā)信
第一次寫發(fā)信,不是英語專業(yè),也不是外貿(mào)專業(yè)畢業(yè)的,沒有任何經(jīng)驗,求大神幫忙更改,最好能有吸引力點,能夠抓住客戶的興趣,跪求??!
dear sir /madam,
it’s my pleasure to contact with you.
i am elvis represent star packing limited of hongkong, which is specialized in designing and providing the??jewelry package items, such us boxes, displays, paper bag, pouches, we offer the packing items for our clients many years .
we he good reputation in jewelry packing field,??the competitive price and best quality are offered for clients.
we are expecting to set up a good business cooperation with your company.
our company website is if you he any question, please link our website, and you could understand much more information about our company and products. the enclosed photo is for you to refer
your any comments and feedback will be helpful for us,??we are looking forward to hear from you by mail.
we will do our best for you.
best regards
elvis[收起]
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